A Limerick

[kaasirpent]

There was a young man with a plight:
His Limericks were...never quite right.
     They scanned and they rhymed—
     Most all of the time—
Until the last line, which never quite worked as he intended.

Comments

[territan.livejournal.com]

...until the last line, which was shite?

I know, I know, self-refuting prophecy and all...

[slymongoose.livejournal.com]

Hahahhahahahahaha!!!
I love your brainz!

[slymongoose.livejournal.com]

... although I'd suggest:
"Until the last line, which never quite worked out as he intended."

I think the extra extraneous word makes it even better.